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Mount Fuji |
Waterlilies | 23. View from Fujimigahara in Owari Province |
Muscling the last board tight, HokusaiExposes structure, tools, and sweat--Barrel, or tub, this circle leads us in,Then we spin, board by board, and pop outOnto the sand, and some unseen slopeSo big it puts us hundreds of feet aboveThe mudlines between rice paddies;Pulling back, we conclude we're on a cliff,Liable to roll off, but no, nowWe are inside a tunnel, at the mouth,Peering through, not around.
Hokusai's the artist of prepositions, alwaysSubtly shape-shifting, waving awayThe middle ground, erasing the exact linkBetween here and there.Like a taiko drum, this vast OBangs on our attention. The peripheryFades away, one tree becoming a far-offForest; the scene is inside the wheel, and out.How slight the almost unnoticed extra,The modest exclamation, the "over there"Just poking up, a bit off-center,The snowpile in summer, his own Mount Fuji! |
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