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We act as a stand-in for your readers. We tell you when we get confused. And then we give you concrete suggestions for changeaction items you can carry out, new tables of contents, new paragraphs. When we dont know enough to give you a complete revision, we ask you the questions we think users would have, so you can grab a subject matter expert, and get the answers.
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